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Dear Sarah,
Thanks for your e-mail . I always love hearing from you. I live in the city to Nizniy Novgorod. Every day I go to school.
My lessons start at 8 am. After school? I go to home. Then, I go to the gym. I can't stand crowded street. Today, I'm going to walk with my friends.
What did you do today? How are you? What's your weather?
Anyway, I'd better finish here. Write again soon.

Jim