Написал письмо на тему: "Традиционное блюдо моей страны". Можете пожалуйста проверить?
Dear teacher, Natalia Vladimirovna.
I hope you are well. In your last email you asked me about a traditional dish in my country.
My country this is Russia. Russia is biggest country in the world. Russian kitchen is very diverse.
My favorite russian food is pelmeni. You need dough and meat to make pelmeni. Pelmeni can be cooked boiled and fried. Boiled pelmeni are cooked in hot water. Fried pelmeni are cooked on pan in sundflower oil. Pelmeni is very delicious and hearty, but fried pelmeni is very fat and harmful.Pelmeni ...(здесь должно быть слово "подаются", надеюсь на вашу помощь) with sour cream or mayonnaise.
What is your favorite traditional dish? Write to me letter! Goodbye!
Your student,
Dima 17.11.18.
Не знаю как составить предложение "Пельмени подаются со сметаной или майонезом". Поможете? Так же, пожалуйста, проверьте всё письмо и поставьте свою сугубо личную оценку. Спасибо!
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Dear Natalia Vladimirovna,
I hope you are well. In your last email you asked me about a traditional dish in my country.
My country IS Russia. Russia is THE biggest country in the world. Russian kitchen is very diverse.
My favorite russian food is pelmeni. You need dough and meat to make pelmeni. Pelmeni can be cooked (я бы "cooked" убрала) boiled and fried. Boiled pelmeni are cooked in hot water. Fried pelmeni are cooked on pan in sundflower oil. Pelmeni is very delicious and hearty, but fried pelmeni is very fat and harmful.Pelmeni is sold with sour cream or mayonnaise.
What is your favorite traditional dish?
Write to me letter!(я бы здесь написала "Write me back", но и так нормально)
Goodbye!
Your student,
Dima
Ну я вроде бы проверила. Могла что-то упустить. Но вообще, письмо очень хорошее!