Нужно проверить на ошибки письмо в формате огэ. Также не помешают замечания по поводу чего угодно. Любая критика. Заранее спасибо. Текст задания.

You have 30 minutes to do this task. You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend, Tony. ... We spent the whole weekend in the country and it was great! We were lucky with the weather and everyone had the opportunity to do what they wanted: Dad fished on the lake, Mum and my younger sister sunbathed and played badminton, and I tried to train our puppy... ...What do people usually do at weekends in your country? What season is the best for outdoor activities in your region? Do you usually spend weekends with your family or with your friends and why?

Write her a letter and answer her 3 questions. Write 100–120 words. Remember the rules of letter writing.