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Вместо wishes to the administration, лучше написать there are proposals for improvement.
И в конце я бы написала так: To increase comfort of the students I suggest changing beds for the new ones and putting a sofa in the lobby. In conclusion I hope и далее по тексту.
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И в конце я бы написала так:
To increase comfort of the students I suggest changing beds for the new ones and putting a sofa in the lobby. In conclusion I hope и далее по тексту.