Помогите пожалуйста! Я написала диалоги, но в английском я профан. Исправьте, пожалуйста, грамматические ошибки и, может, дополнить чем-нибудь можете. Помогите сделать диалоги более "живыми".
1) Problems with tenage children:
- Hi, Monika
- Hi, Clara
- I have a problem!
- What happiened?
- I think i feel in love with Jack.
- Where is the problem?
- He's so handsome and smart. He doesen't attention to me.
- Don't be silly. I saw how he lokked at you. I think he like you.
- O realy? Great, thank you!
- I's my pleasure
2) A wedding
- Kaley, you remember our parents anniversary is coming us soon?
- Let's think about what to get them.
- I have some Ideas. I remember that mum wanted to take a holiday. But we don't have a lot money.
- I think it would be a good dea to buy two tichets for a theater. That not very expensive, but interesting. I think they'll have a nice time.
- Good idea!
3) A visit to the dentist
- Hi, doctor Phil.
- Hello, mr Freema. What wrong?
- I have a severe toothache.
- Ok. Sit down and open you' mounth.
- Do you think it's seriosly?
- Nope, but you have visit to me after a week.
- Thank's, doctor.
1) Problems with tenage children:
- Hi, Monika
- Hi, Clara
- I have a problem!
- What happiened?
- I think i feel in love with Jack.
- Where is the problem?
- He's so handsome and smart. He doesen't attention to me.
- Don't be silly. I saw how he lokked at you. I think he like you.
- O realy? Great, thank you!
- I's my pleasure
2) A wedding
- Kaley, you remember our parents anniversary is coming us soon?
- Let's think about what to get them.
- I have some Ideas. I remember that mum wanted to take a holiday. But we don't have a lot money.
- I think it would be a good dea to buy two tichets for a theater. That not very expensive, but interesting. I think they'll have a nice time.
- Good idea!
3) A visit to the dentist
- Hi, doctor Phil.
- Hello, mr Freema. What wrong?
- I have a severe toothache.
- Ok. Sit down and open you' mounth.
- Do you think it's seriosly?
- Nope, but you have visit to me after a week.
- Thank's, doctor.
Answers & Comments
-Hi, Monika
-Hi, Clara
-I have a problem!
-What happened?
- I think I fell in love with Jack.
-What is the problem?
-He's so handsome and smart. He doesn't pay attention to me.
-Don't be silly. I saw how he looked at you. I think he likes you.
-Oh, really? Great, thank you!
-You are welcome/
2)A wedding
-Kaley, do you remember our parent`s anniversary is coming soon?
-Let's think what we shall give them
-I have some ideas. I remember that my Mum wanted to celebrate their feast. But we don't have a lot of money.
-I think it will be a good idea to buy two theater tickets. Thay are not very expensive, but it will be very interesting for our parents. I think they'll have a nice time.
-What a good idea!
3) A visit to the dentist
- Hi, doctor Lobanov.
- Hello, Mrs Freema. What is wrong?
- I have a severe toothache.
- Ok. Sit down and open your mounth.
- Do you think it is serious?
- No, but you will have to come to me next week.
-Thank you, doctor.
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2) просто coming soon, a lot OF money, idea, two tickets TO THE theatre,.
3) what IS wrong?, seriously,