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Many parents allow their children to keep the animals in the house. For children's entertainment and fun game.
I would like to express my opinion on this problem. I think it is a good idea. Firstly care about animals learns a child responsibility. Secondly friendship with the pet since childhood learns children to love and respect the animals.
On the other hand, many parents believe that young children can not take good care of their pets and pay them enough attention.
I do not agree with this opinion because for children is essential to learn to be responsibility for another's life.
In conclusion, we can say that looking ater pets from a young age is a good idea. Pets are very good friends for children.
Many parents allow their children to keep the animals in the house. For children's entertainment and fun game.
I would like to express my opinion on this problem. I think it is a good idea. Firstly care about animals learns a child responsibility. Secondly friendship with the pet since childhood learns children to love and respect the animals.
On the other hand, many parents believe that young children can not take good care of their pets and pay them enough attention.
I do not agree with this opinion because for children is essential to learn to be responsibility for another's life.
In conclusion, we can say that looking ater pets from a young age is a good idea. Pets are very good friends for children.
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"Taking care of animals" instead of "Care about animals"
"teaches children to be more responsible " instead of "learns a child responsibility"
I corrected the text and it looks like that.
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Many parents allow their children to keep animals in their house. For children this is an entertaining and funny game.
I would like to express my opinion on this problem. I think it is a good idea. Firstly, caring about animals teaches a child to be responsible. Secondly, friendship with pet which exists from childhood teaches children to love and respect animals.
On the other hand, a lot of parents believe that young children cannot take good care of their pets and pay them enough attention.
I do not agree with this opinion because it is essential for children to learn to be responsible for another's life.
In conclusion, I think that looking ater pets from an early age is a good idea. Pets are very good friends of children.
Seems that you confuse learn and teach
learn - учиться
teach - научить