Проверьте, пожалуйста, текст! Те, кто просто напишут, что всё правильно получат удалённый ответ. Запятые тоже надо проверить. Чем можно заменить слово so?
Hello, Mr. Brown! My name is Eugene and I’m 9th grade student. I like traveling and doing some sports, so your summer camp is interesting for me.
In this summer I have a lot of time, so I can stay for 3 weeks from the beginning of July. For my opinion, at this time the weather is the best, but that’s very important for outdoor activities.
I would choose adventure workshop, because I tried diving last year and really liked it. Also I have experience in film making, so film academy workshop would be interesting for me. I could help another children and learn something new.
Best regards,
Eugene.
Hello, Mr. Brown! My name is Eugene and I’m 9th grade student. I like traveling and doing some sports, so your summer camp is interesting for me.
In this summer I have a lot of time, so I can stay for 3 weeks from the beginning of July. For my opinion, at this time the weather is the best, but that’s very important for outdoor activities.
I would choose adventure workshop, because I tried diving last year and really liked it. Also I have experience in film making, so film academy workshop would be interesting for me. I could help another children and learn something new.
Best regards,
Eugene.
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Итак, начнём!
1 .so можно заменить that's why-вот почему (перевод)
2 надо исправить:
-I'm the 9th grade student.
-travelling
-This summer I'll have a lot of time.....
-....I can stay(здесь надо написать где ты хочешь остановиться, предложение незаконченное).............
-In my opinion.......
-не надо писать at this time.......просто This time.......
-Also I have an experience......
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Hello, Mr. Brown!
My name is Eugene and I’m a 9th grader. I enjoy traveling and playing several sports, because of that I am interested in your summer camp.
This summer I’ll have lots of time on hand, and would like to participate for 3 weeks starting early July. In my opinion, that’s when the weather is best, which it’s highly important for outdoor activities.
I would love to do the adventure workshop, I’ve tried diving last year and really liked it. Also I have some experience in film making, so the film academy workshop sounds quite interesting. I look forward to helping other campers and learning new things .
Best regards,
Eugene.