Проверьте правильность выполнения задания и поправьте пожалуйста если есть ошибки!
Correct the mistakes.

1. It’s a cake in the cupboard if you’re hungry.
It's cake in the cupboard if you're hungry.

2. She rings he every evening.
She rings him every evening.
3. This is a great toy. Do you want to play with this?
This is a great toy. You want to play with that?
4. There’s almost ten o’clock. Let’s go.
It's almost ten o'clock. Let’s go.
5. Do you want to try some cake? There is really delicious.
Do you want to try the cake? It's really delicious.
6. Your hair it is full of sand from the beach.
Your hair is full of sand from the beach.
7. Jane she arrived at school late today.
Jane she arrived came to school late today.
8. Will you come and visit we soon?
Will you come and visit us soon?
9. Someone is knocking at the door. I think he is Henry.
Someone's knocking on the door. I think he's Henry.
10. It is a book about dogs on the shelf.
This is a book about the dogs of the shelf.
11. I have a lot of pens. Choose it.
I have a lot of pens. To choose it.
12. Do you like my new watch? I bought one yesterday.
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