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Highland games are always on the 1st Saturday in September and Braemar in Scotland is the most famous place for this event.

Many athletes travel to Scotland each year and compete in different events and marching bands in tradition clothing play the bagpipes.

The most popular events of the day are "tug of war" and "tossing the caber".

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