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Dear, Joanna,

Im writing to say give some advice. I think your problem big not because it one can correct.

If i were you, i would started do regular exercise, observe diet and go in training hall evening when me see not. Also I would tell their parents about on event on PE in order to they talk and eliminated problem with Miss Bell. Good luck, dont give up.

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Заранее спасибо!