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It was late summer evening. I was sitting in living room and choosing film for tonight.
The longer I sat, the darker it got outside. At last I chose “Venom” and got ready to watch.
Suddenly I heard a kind of noise from the second floor. I was scared. Actually, it was a wind, or just an accident, but it was frightening. When I calmed down, I continued watching. But after 5 minutes I again heard a noise, and saw my cat running down the stairs. I was really scared and angry, so I took a flashlight and went to the second floor. There was quite. Doors in rooms were closed. I was trying not to make a sound and went into my room. There was a tall black silhouette which was looking at me. It turned around and jumped out of window. I was so scared I couldn’t move.
That night I didn’t sleep, and when morning came, I called police. They did not find any evidence and left. But I am sure, that something abnormal was in my house and now I cant find people, who can believe in it and help me to forgot that night.
It was late summer evening. I was sitting in living room and choosing film for tonight.
The longer I sat, the darker it got outside. At last I chose “Venom” and got ready to watch.
Suddenly I heard a kind of noise from the second floor. I was scared. Actually, it was a wind, or just an accident, but it was frightening. When I calmed down, I continued watching. But after 5 minutes I again heard a noise, and saw my cat running down the stairs. I was really scared and angry, so I took a flashlight and went to the second floor. There was quite. Doors in rooms were closed. I was trying not to make a sound and went into my room. There was a tall black silhouette which was looking at me. It turned around and jumped out of window. I was so scared I couldn’t move.
That night I didn’t sleep, and when morning came, I called police. They did not find any evidence and left. But I am sure, that something abnormal was in my house and now I cant find people, who can believe in it and help me to forgot that night.
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It was late summer evening. I was sitting in living room and choosing movie for tonight.
The longer I sat, the darker it got outside. At last I chose “Venom” and got ready to watch.
Suddenly I heard a kind of noise from the second floor. I was scared. Actually, it was a wind, or just an accident, but it was frightening. When I calmed down, I continued watching. But after 5 minutes I again heard a noise, and saw my cat running down the stairs. I was really scared and angry, so I took a flashlight and went to the second floor. Doors in rooms were closed. I was trying not to make a sound and went into my room. There was a tall black silhouette which was looking at me. It turned around and jumped out of window. I was so scared I couldn’t move.
That night I didn’t sleep, and when morning came, I called police. They did not find any evidence and left. But I am sure, that something abnormal was in my house and now I cant find people, who can believe in it and help me to forgot that night.