Виправити помилки в листі: перетворити поданий лист на офіційний (Formal) і неофйіційний (Informal)
Dear Mr Wilson,
Guess what happened during the break! The bell rang and all students left the classroom. My friends and I decided to play table tennis. However, a group of year 10 students were standing in front of the table. We asked them to move so we could play, but they didn't let us use the table. Of course, we didn't want to create problems, so we left. I think it's unfair because they weren't even using the table.
Talk to them, Mr Wilson. The sports equipment should be for everyone. Waiting for your email on what happens.
Yours.
Harry Thomson
Answers & Comments
Dear Mr. Wilson,
I trust this message finds you well. I am writing to bring to your attention an incident that occurred during the break. As the bell rang, signaling the end of the break, my peers and I sought to engage in a game of table tennis. Regrettably, a group of year 10 students obstructed the table, and our polite request for them to relocate went unanswered. Despite our desire to avoid conflict, we opted to leave the area. I believe it is unjust as they were not utilizing the table at that time.
I kindly request your intervention in addressing this matter with the involved students. It is my belief that sports equipment should be accessible to all students. I look forward to receiving your email regarding the outcome of this situation.
Yours sincerely,
Harry Thomson