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In modern society, most teens consider themselves independent while living with their parents. The issue of freedom of teenagers relevant because they want to grow up quickly and become self-reliant and free.  Personally , I believe that we have a lot of freedom . First, most teenagers early start working , which makes them nezavisymimy and therefore free. Second, many of us do not listen to the advice of parents, relatives, teachers. This makes irresponsible teenagers , but free of any obligations.  There are other opinions . Many parents believe that teens do not get too much freedom and they are trying to protect their children from the outside world , evil people . Unfortunately this can lead to the fact that in the future will not be adapted teenager to life.  Still, my opinion is correct. I stand by my argument because the future depends on the youth , and we must be fully prepared and adapted to life , to the problems disrespect to envy.  In conclusion I want to say that parents should pay attention to their children, to give advice and help to adjust to real life.