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Liliya's performance has improved significantly since the beginning of the year and I was pleased with her results on a recent Cambridge Advanced Examination practice test. She generally participates well in lessons, although she could have a more positive attitude at times. For study she tends to do the minimum required and I feel that she is under-performing in her written work. It is important for her to work independently on developing her vocabulary and grammatical range by recording new lexis, self-editing and correcting her work. She would benefit from reading extensively outside the classroom, incorporating fiction and current affairs. Liliya should never submit her first draft of written work but proof read it carefully and look for ways to increase both its accuracy and range. Doing her work on a computer would make it easier to edit than handwritten work. She makes pertinent points in arguments but should now look to develop and support them in more detail.