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There was a perfect, sunny day at the festival, and it felt like nothing could go wrong. My
sister and I arrived in New Orleans on the eve of Mardi Gras. this carnival
like a Russian holiday - the Maslinica. Because, in this festival also see off
the winter and meet spring.

Only at Mardi Gras happens magnificent colorful parade, with beautiful platforms, and
actors dressed in beautiful costumes. But Mardi Gras guests dressed in carnival
costumes. I and my sister have bought mask. She bought horrible clown mask. I
picked a beautiful mask with feathers.

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